Thursday, October 11, 2012

FFF An Immortal Kiss #15

In a 100 words no more or less, here is my 15th Flasher Fiction Friday. Look to this link to read other great Flasher Fiction posts from great writers. Flasher Fiction Friday

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An Immortal Kiss

Caleb’s lips graze my throat as my heart races in my chest. I wrap my arms around his shoulders…waiting. 

I lean my head upward to Caleb. Shivers travel down my spine as I squirm under his strong embrace. 

I feel his tongue delicately tasting my pulsing warm skin.

Please…I plead in my mind…please. 

I look into the mirror. My eyes are dark with desire, to be completely his. 


“Do you truly wish to be mine…forever?”

“Yesss…” I whisper softly waiting, wanting…anxiously.

I feel his teeth sink into my throat…I gasp, looking into the mirror one last time as a…human.


gemma parkes said...

Oh delicious! Loved this flash, she does look as though she's looking in a mirror behind her head!

Horrorwritingdaddy said...

Very yummy. I felt her anticipation, lovely flash for Halloween month!

Angelica Dawson said...

Oh yes, eternal life together. Great flash

S. J. Maylee said...

I could feel her anticipation building throughout the flash. Powerful flash.

Benjamin T. Russell said...

Oh Wow Rose, this is a cool flash. I love the paranormal slant you put on it at the end, I did 'not' see that coming. The anticipation and build up was delicious and the zinger at the end capped it. Bravo, well done.

Naomi said...

I love this! Sent shivers down me as he sank into her neck.Great flash

Havan said...

That was sexy - I love it, could feel her emotions! :)