Friday, November 9, 2012

FFF #18 Perfection

In a 100 words no more or less, here is my 18th Flasher Fiction Friday. Look to this link to read other great Flasher Fiction posts from great writers. Flasher Fiction Friday

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She stands poised as a perfect statue. This mystery woman leans on the railing staring off into the distance as her leather skirt blows in the breeze. The old wooden dock trails off and vanishes into the ocean as she then seems to be waiting…waiting for someone.  Her legs open in perfect form like a statue, as her long hair covers her topless body.  She dares not move as if something will happen if she does.  Still she waits in perfect form.

The view she offers to onlookers shock many, but for one the view is just perfect.  

 Her Master.


gemma parkes said...

Loved this flash. I can just imagine him standing behind her ordering her to remain still while he feasts his eyes on her perfect form! Great description!

Naomi said...

You read the picture well. Excellent imagery. I'm glad her Master is pleased

Julez S Morbius said...

Excellent flash with a perfect ending. Love it

S. J. Maylee said...

Each line builds this sense of calm and I don't understand why until the last line. You've captured a beautiful moment of submission. Well done.

Benjamin T. Russell said...

I must admit her form and carriage are perfect. Her butt is also picture perfect too. I imagine she would truly be the perfect submissive, lover and friend. And if she'd just bend forward a little bit more, she'd be lined up for her Master to give her a perfect stand-up fuck. Well done Ms. A. Muwah!!@