Friday, December 7, 2012

FFF # 21 Maria's Dream Comes True


In a 100 words no more or less, here is my 21st Flasher Fiction Friday. Look to this link to read other great Flasher Fiction posts from great writers. Flasher Fiction Friday

Enjoy!! 







Maria’s Dream Comes True

Carlos slowly crawls onto the bed as Maria lies on her side reading.  She doesn’t pay any attention to him as he rests his arm across her waist gazing into her eyes.  Maria continues to ignore Carlos as she reads deeply.  A smile forms on her face as he runs his chin along her shoulder, making her shiver.

“What?”

“Nothing. How is your book?”

“Ana is in trouble again with Christian. He’s about to give her a spanking, for ignoring him and not listening to his orders.”

“Hmm…that gives me an idea.” Carlos grins wide.

“Oh…?” Maria raises an eye.

8 comments:

Naomi said...

Oh now I have to find out what happens. Will she enjoy her spanking? Great flash

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Nice scene going there. I like the life you put on there.

Angelica Dawson said...

Nice. I was waiting for a 50 Shades reference. ;) I'm reading... no, wait, I want what you're proposing. LOL

gemma parkes said...

Great flash! This book inspired couples across the world. My partner found the music, read the scene to me and then re-enacted it ages before you could buy the soundtrack. Amazing!

Julez S Morbius said...

Great Flash Aurora and a great take on the picture

kendeldavi said...

Love what you did with this. Ooh, I want this to keep going.

S. J. Maylee said...

That oh just says it all. Love it. I can feel her interest and attention turn completely to Carlos. Yes, I want more too. Great Flash.

Benjamin T. Russell said...

Oh yesssss, if she's reading 50 Shades, that should give Carlos a LOT of ideas. Clearly, that book has spiced up many a bedroom. Rose, this is a creative flash and I love how you made the subtle reference to such a popular book. Well done.