Tuesday, October 1, 2013

The Prey Hunts TTT#2

In a 200 words no more or less, here is my 2nd Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser. Look to this link to read other great Teaser’s posts from great writers.  Visit this link to view and read other great Teasers. Tantalizing Tues Teaser


The Prey Hunts

He’s drunk, this is just perfect.

Just how she wanted him to be and he wouldn’t remember a thing…hopefully. This is how Ariana worked…hunted. Meet at a bar; get them drunk, and then yum.

She danced with her prey, holding him close, his eyes never leaving hers. She presses against him encouraging him to follow her lead.

Once Ariana has him drunk enough, she takes out into the cool brisk moonlight night. Now she needs to get him home as he leans on her.

“I’m taking you home, you’re rather drunk. I don’t want anything to happen to you.” Ariana says with a small smile.

He only nods as she supports him. They reach her car and she plops him into the passenger seat and then climbs into the car. She sees him sleeping, grinning to herself. Her hunger is strong but she pushes it deep till she gets her meal home.

Ariana pulls out of the parking heading to her apartment.

“You really think I was drunk.”

Ariana looks fast nearly swerving off the road.

Her prey sits up, eyes golden and fangs long.

“You’d think you’d recognize your own sire.”

“I…” Ariana gasps trying to speak.

“Shhh…just drive.”


J.P. Stevens said...

Ohh now that was gripping! Great Tease. xx

Pablo Michaels said...

FABULOUS TWIST! I never expected him to turn the table on her. Vivacious teaser, keeping me well fed.

Leann Mitchell said...


Molly Synthia said...

Oh great! That one got me, and I almost never get surprised. Fabulous! Just awesome!

Muffy Wilson said...

I did NOT see that coming! Fabulous teaser! And your build up was Artfully executed!:) xo

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Oh, LMAO, that's a game-changing scene. That makes Ariana the 2nd best pretender. What an awesome post!

Julez S Morbius said...

BRILLIANT. I loved the twist at the end, I was not expecting that

Doris O'connor said...

Oh perfect! I loved that twist at the end :-)

Anonymous said...

Great work, Aurora. The preyed-upon hunter. I thought she was the one who was turning the tables, but that added twist got me - and I loved it. I wonder if you have a follow-up in mind...