Friday, February 14, 2014

FFF# 48: Caught Down by The Sea

In a 100 words no more or less, here is my 48th Flasher Fiction Friday. Look to this link to read other great Flasher Fiction posts from great writers. Flasher Fiction Friday

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Caught Down by The Sea

Aria stares into the reflective thing in her hand. Her tail emerges from the water and slowly forms into two long smooth legs. Aria’s tattoos shimmer in the light of the sun as she rests on the rocks. She watches to be sure that no one sees her, especially her long blue/green tail. Aria knows she isn’t allowed to the surface, but she likes to watch the two leg beings.  She watches, as then her toes touch the water and her tail returns.

“Oh…my…what…beauty.”

Aria looks up startled to see a man staring at her.

She turns to go.

“Wait!”

9 comments:

Naomi said...

Great flasher. Will he find her again and fall for the mermaid or is Aria gone forever. There is so much more to write

Muffy Wilson said...

Lovely flash! Sweet and romantic. Love finds us when we least expect it! Loved it, Aurora xo

Faberge Nostromo said...

But will she wait? Does he know what he might get himself into? Intriguing....

Rose Anderson said...

You just gotta love mermaids. Very nice.

Doris O'connor said...

Beautiful. Will he go after her, I wonder?

Theresa Stuart said...

maybe he's going to be her reason to surface again..... very nice and romantic.... hugs T

Dariel Raye said...

Ooh, intriguing! Now you must tell us whether she waits or not, and what happens next. Do a part two :-D

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

I liked this flash. And now will he go after her?

Brantwijn Serrah said...

Terrific! Sounds like a new take on The Little Mermaid. I'd be interested to see where it goes.