Friday, June 13, 2014

FFF# 63 Grey Summer Rain

In a 100 words no more or less, here is my 63rd Flasher Fiction Friday. Look to this link to read other great Flasher Fiction posts from great writers. Flasher Fiction Friday


Tumbler by Summer Ross

Grey Summer Rain

Aurora walks into the street as the rain pours down hard. Grey skies make everything look gloomy as she takes off her shoes and starts on her way. She sighs deeply after her phone call with her now ex. Aurora never thought that Darren would break up over the phone. More so to tell her he’s not even in the country, but in Paris with another much younger woman. He tells her briefly it’s over and that he’s in love with someone younger. Tears flowing, Aurora forever now hates being 40, as the rain blankets her pained heart and soul. 


Naomi said...

The grey skies echo her emotions. I really feel her sadness. Lovely flasher

Jorja Lovett said...

*Sniff* A beautifully sad piece.

Doris O'connor said...

Oh, bless her, you can feel her sadness.

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Oh my gosh, I feel bad for her. What a sorrowing piece. I'm sure, the man who dumped her will go through his hardship. Karma's a bitch!

Muffy Wilson said...

Is it a wonder that our heroine is named Aurora.............emotionally charges, heartfelt and beautifully written. Sad, yet beautiful :) xo

Julez S Morbius said...

heart wrenching yet written beautifully