Friday, August 29, 2014

FFF# 74 Forbidden Love

In a 100 words no more or less, here is my 74th Flasher Fiction Friday. Look to this link to read other great Flasher Fiction posts from great writers. Flasher Fiction Friday


Forbidden Love

It’s the future and love is strictly forbidden. The government watches closely among the citizens of the smog filled city. Yet this does not deter Louie and his love Sarina. They meet secretly in the shadows or on the rooftops where the government’s eyes cannot see them. Words do not have to be spoken as they know their love is strong. Sarina ponders their future as Louie reads her telepathically.

“We will be caught.” She stares off.

“No we will not. No one knows of our secret.”

“But it is forbidden…”

“No one knows that we are siblings in love.”


Muffy Wilson said...

Oh, WoW, AuroraRose!!! That was so creative and inventive and clever and...and...and ALL of it!!! I loved it, totally loved it!! So 2984!! Fabulous Flash; absolutely loved your take on this photo. xo

Dariel Raye said...

I love the way your mind works! This one caught me by surprise ;-D

Julez S Morbius said...

That was written brilliantly and I wasn't expecting that last line

Naomi said...

Oh wow! Loved your last line. Great flash

Raven McAllan said...

That took me by surprise. Fantastic writing, and great last line

Doris O'connor said...

Oh, wow, you got me with that last line! Fab.