Friday, September 5, 2014

FFF# 75 Eternal Dance

In a 100 words no more or less, here is my 75th Flasher Fiction Friday. Look to this link to read other great Flasher Fiction posts from great writers. Flasher Fiction Friday

Enjoy!! 



Eternal Dance

The mysterious stranger takes to the floor. Music fills the night-club. Holding his red satin cape to his sides, he follows the music. People step aside on the floor. Who is he? People whisper and point as the stranger dances. He eyes her in the shadows, and slowly approaches. The crowd parts like a wave leading him to her. The stranger guides the young lass to the floor. He wraps himself around her like a shield. She follows his movements.

“I knew I would find you here. You are mine…now.”

“Yes…I…am…yours…Master.”

His lips graze her pale throat. She whimpers softly.

9 comments:

Naomi said...

controlling, masterful, sexy, shiver giving and wonderful. I love your flasher

Angelica Dawson said...

Possessive and magical. I like it!

Doris O'connor said...

Lovely! He's not just a mere human is he? :-)

Muffy Wilson said...

This is a splendid line, "The crowd parts like a wave leading him to her." So visual, so compelling, and foreboding. I can't predict whether he is a DOM or a vampire, but I love it. Your flash was a visual delight. Beautifully constructed and executed. Wonderful mastery of a mere 100 words. Loved it.

Mangus Khan said...

Wow!, that was mystical ...wonderful flash

Pablo Michaels said...

There are so many vivid details written in a mere 100 words, bringing the finale to it's anticipated climax. The words flowed naturally like poetry.

Jorja Lovett said...

Ooh, sent shivers right up my spine :)

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Ooh... chilling!

Julez S Morbius said...

excellently written flash