Thursday, November 13, 2014

FFF# 84 A Devious Mistress

In a 100 words no more or less, here is my 84th Flasher Fiction Friday. Look to this link to read other great Flasher Fiction posts from great writers. Flasher Fiction Friday

Enjoy!! 


A Devious Mistress


Elsa pulls back the curtains to stare out the window. Her gown shimmers in the sunlight. Elsa’s gown barely covers the lower part of her back. Hair pulled up, she sighs…waiting for him. She loves him, but is finding it hard not to see him when she wants. Elsa is his Mistress, he has a wife. She knows he can only come at certain times. Yet…her heart aches when she’s alone. Elsa knows that today he has must decide. Either divorce his wife, or…Elsa will do it…her way. Elsa hates getting blood on her, and dealing with the cleanup afterward.

9 comments:

Angelica Dawson said...

A very interesting voice you've chosen. It's great in a short piece like this, but I wouldn't want to read chapter after chapter. It makes her slightly creepy, and with that ending, very creepy.

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

She wasn't going to let him go; one way or another. Definitely a fatal attraction.

Julez S Morbius said...

Very dark flash love it

DK ffrench said...

Scary stuff!

Doris O'connor said...

Oh, my, that last line, I've got gooose bumps now! Love it!

Phoenix Johnson said...

Oooh so wicked! And creepy. Very well done!

Dariel Raye said...

Sounds like he'd better be careful, too! Wonder how many clean-ups Elsa's been involved in. Dark. The voice subtly tips us off that Elsa's a beautiful wack-job. Love it!

Naomi said...

The end sent a real shiver through me. Great flash

Muffy Wilson said...

I didn't expect that. Very dark and ominous. I loved it. xo