Thursday, November 20, 2014

FFF# 85 Guardian

In a 100 words no more or less, here is my 85th Flasher Fiction Friday. Look to this link to read other great Flasher Fiction posts from great writers. Flasher Fiction Friday

Enjoy!! 




Guardian

Nicholi sits on the wet sand. He stares towards the sea. His angelic wings have turn black. He looks up into the heavens from where he had fallen. Nicholi suddenly feels a warm breeze. He sees a beautiful angel. She walks up to him and kneels down.

“My young angel. You are not being punished. You have been given your first mission.”

Nicholi perks.

“You are to save a young woman from her abusive husband. You will remain with her. Fail…and you will remain here forever.”

Nicholi nods.

Rising slowly his black wings suddenly turn into a coat, and clothes.

7 comments:

Muffy Wilson said...

Shades of John Travolta here. So clever. Very touching. Loved it, AGAIN. xo

Doris O'connor said...
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Doris O'connor said...

Gah, I try that again! Forgive me, full of cold meds, and can't think straight.

An intriguing concept, Aurora. Hope he succeeds in his mission :-)

Naomi said...

Wonderful. I hope Nicholi succeeds with his mission

Angelica Dawson said...

Oh, now I want to know how he fares.

Dariel Raye said...

Yum! Sounds like the makings of a great story! Like this one a lot, Aurora :-)

Julez S Morbius said...

Excellent flash which you can't leave there :)