Friday, May 13, 2016

FFF# 147 The 100 Year Wait

In a 100 words no more or less, here is my 147th Flasher Fiction Friday. Look to this link to read other great Flasher Fiction posts from great writers. Flasher Fiction Friday

The 100 Year Wait

On the cliffs, Marila looks over the vast clear ocean. She watches two lovers walk along the beach. Her heart aches deep for her long awaited mate. She left the ocean for 100 years to find the one. Today she’s to return without her mate. She descends to the water’s edge with a heavy heart.  Marila rests on the sands as her body begins its change. She crawls into the comforts of her home.

Till something fast swims past her. Marila notices a merman smiling at her.

He takes her hand in his. Instantly she knew her 100 year answer. 


Angelica Dawson said...

Fantastic piece! I adore it! Her love was there all along. :)

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

What a lovely ending; very touching.

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Doris O'connor said...

Aw, that's lovely :-)