Friday, November 25, 2016

FFF# 167 The Native

In a 100 words no more or less, here is my 167th Flasher Fiction Friday. Look to this link to read other great Flasher Fiction posts from great writers. Flasher Fiction Friday



The Native

Luci stranded on an island. Alone and afraid tries to find help and plan her survival. Hours pass until she begins to hear drums. Heart racing with hope she races to the sound. She comes to a clearance and sees people...natives dancing in a circle. Her eyes fall upon a very muscled native wearing only a tan decorated skirt. Her heart races in her chest. He smiles as he reaches out to her. Afraid yet feeling unusually turned on, she joins the dancing.

“The prince has found his mate.” Women chatter as they dance.

Luci smiles unaware of her fate.

4 comments:

Pablo Michaels said...

Wow! I love how your fantasies came alive in your flash. Just what surprise will she experience. You left me imagining where you would take this 100 word story into a longer epic.

Doris O'connor said...

Love. It. We had a similar take on this picture this week :-)

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Oh shit, LOL! I love the twist you put into this piece. Very creative, and wished to know what will happen next. Great work.

Julez S Morbius said...

Brilliant flash. Would definitely love to read a lot more